Anakin could hear mumbled voices as he rushed into Chancellor Palpatine’s office. He had to help the chancellor if he was going to save his wife and child. He’s the only hope of saving Padme’, Anakin thought. If Master Windu kills the chancellor, I’ll lose her forever.
When Anakin finally got to Palpatine’s office, he found Mace standing over Chancellor Palpatine’s dead body. He stood at the entry to the office, with a shocked look on his face.
“NO!” Anakin screamed. “You killed her! She means everything to me, and you killed her!” Mace stared at him with a confused look on his face after this odd outburst from Anakin. Realizing what he had just said, Anakin dropped to his knees in tears. He was done for. When the council found out that he and Padme’ were married, and expecting a child, they would expel him from the order, or worse. He just made it onto the council, and now he was going to lose it all. And Obi-Wan, what was he going to think? He’d be so disappointed.
Mace looked at Anakin with a slightly knowing look on his face. There was only one person he could have been talking about. The senator from Naboo. But what did ‘you killed her’ have to do with Senator Amidala? Mace walked over to Anakin and bent down so they were face to face.
“What do you mean, “I killed her?’ Anakin?” Mace was staring eye to eye with him, but it was as if he was staring into a black hole. When Anakin finally snapped out of the trance he was in, he was startled by Master Windu. He hated moments like this. Master Windu never trusted him, always doubted him. Of all the people to tell about Padme’, he was the last person who should have found out.
There was nothing he could do about it now. As Master Windu stared into his eyes, he came to realize that there was more going on between the two of them than either had let on. Much more.
When Anakin finally got to Palpatine’s office, he found Mace standing over Chancellor Palpatine’s dead body. He stood at the entry to the office, with a shocked look on his face.
“NO!” Anakin screamed. “You killed her! She means everything to me, and you killed her!” Mace stared at him with a confused look on his face after this odd outburst from Anakin. Realizing what he had just said, Anakin dropped to his knees in tears. He was done for. When the council found out that he and Padme’ were married, and expecting a child, they would expel him from the order, or worse. He just made it onto the council, and now he was going to lose it all. And Obi-Wan, what was he going to think? He’d be so disappointed.
Mace looked at Anakin with a slightly knowing look on his face. There was only one person he could have been talking about. The senator from Naboo. But what did ‘you killed her’ have to do with Senator Amidala? Mace walked over to Anakin and bent down so they were face to face.
“What do you mean, “I killed her?’ Anakin?” Mace was staring eye to eye with him, but it was as if he was staring into a black hole. When Anakin finally snapped out of the trance he was in, he was startled by Master Windu. He hated moments like this. Master Windu never trusted him, always doubted him. Of all the people to tell about Padme’, he was the last person who should have found out.
There was nothing he could do about it now. As Master Windu stared into his eyes, he came to realize that there was more going on between the two of them than either had let on. Much more.
3 comments:
Pretty good! :D You've got your grammar down, which is more than I can say for others... Critics: 0 Writer: 1.
You've picked a great subject! It's good to explore what would have happened if Palpatine was killed. Critics: 0, Writer 2.
I like it! :D I'll be watching for your other chapters!
Tis very good so far Grandmother ^^. And I usually dont read SW fics, but I will this once. BTW...guess who >P
I look forward to your next blogs :)
Beware of your grammar.... :D
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